Realizing the Potential - Part 3

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*She removes Dana's top to expose her brother's decision.

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  1. Everitt JamesDecember 23, 2013 at 2:09 PM

    Utterly fantastic! Great twists & depth!

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    1. 124235aDecember 24, 2013 at 4:57 PM

      Thanks!! Ideas for a part 4, or should I stop here?

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    2. Everitt JamesDecember 24, 2013 at 9:22 PM

      Maybe his sister brews up a duplicate of him to fill in until he learns his lesson as Dana (ala golem spell). The duplicate might ask 'Dana' out!

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    3. Everitt JamesDecember 25, 2013 at 6:17 AM

      Or the duplicate gets jealous as 'Dana' start dating his old best friend

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